Posted by: Karla Stewart Okala | February 14, 2011

Valentine Candy: For My Four Girls

dripping drool kisses

drizzled with sticky syrup

hugs all covered with

gooey hands filled with the hearts

of my sweet, sweet valentines

…………………………………………………………..

This poem was my attempt at a Tanka, a form being explored today at One Stop Poetry. Visit their site to read more poems and add your own: http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/02/one-stop-poetry-form-todays-form-is-tanka.html

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  1. […] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Karla Okala and One Stop Poetry, Karla Okala. Karla Okala said: Here's my tanku for @onestoppoetry Form Monday #Valentine Candy: For My Four Girls: http://wp.me/p13HT5-2F #poem #po… http://wp.me/p13HT5-2F […]

  2. Awww… baby love reminders. So grateful I found the Love Tankas today!! Especially YOURS! Beautiful.

  3. Lovely! And a perfect tribut to four children (I assume!)


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